The first anniversary

Hello Sir [이름]! I am amazed by your work. I haven\'t realized that it\'s been a year since we started our classes. Nevertheless, I am very proud of you. Keep learning English and keep writing  good literature. You have a talent for it!~~T.Dee

29th Oct was a year since I started the Power English.

>>29th October last year was when I started in Power English. It\'s been a year since.
10 minutes is very little time. Anyway I didn’t stop it and I’ve been steady for a year. 

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: A ten-minute class is very little time but still I didn’t stop and I’ve been steady for a year. 
I think that If I started the Power English earlier, I can expect better results.

>>I think that If I started in Power English earlier, I can expect better results.
In fact, I still do not understand well if the teacher talks fast or talks a lot.

>>CORRECT!
And often I can\'t say what I want to say.

>>CORRECT!
But I think that it seems to be better than when I first started.

>>CORRECT!
Reading and understanding technical reports in business is not a big problem with a little help of a dictionary.

>>CORRECT!

But there are many difficulties in writing sentences in English.

>>CORRECT!
I’m looking for ways to make up for the shortcomings.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I’m looking for ways to make up for my shortcomings/weak points.
Now, my conclusion is that I have to study hard at all times.

>>CORRECT!