The first class

2010-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

학생이 쓴 원문

I took the level test this Monday morning, and it was interesting. Freetalking was pretty easy for me, but making sentences and coming up with synonym and antonym of particular words was quite struggling. Anyway,I enjoyed the time with talking on the phone in English. It reminds me when I was in Canada. When I stayed with Canadian and friends from all over the world. I realized that communication with people from different countries is really great,eventhough it is stressful sometimes. It is just about my poor English, not about other's. For this reason, I really like to learn and study English, and hope to enjoy all contents from this website.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for sending me your composition! I encourage you to send more.  I agree with you that communicating with people from different countries is great! Speaking English opens our doors to other culture, people and places. I know you will do good here! I'm here to help.  See you in class! __t.Karen__   Here are my corrections for you: I took the level test this Monday morning, and it was interesting.  >>Correct! Freetalking was pretty easy for me, but making sentences and coming up with synonym and antonym of particular words was quite struggling. >>Correct! [I know you hard a hard time, but you did great though]Anyway,I enjoyed the time with talking on the phone in English. >>Anyway, I enjoyed the time talking on the phone in English.It reminds me when I was in Canada.  >>Correct!When I stayed with Canadian and friends from all over the world. >>Correct! I realized that communication with people from different countries is really great,eventhough it is stressful sometimes. >> I realized that communicating with people from different countries is really great, even though it is sometimes stressful. It is just about my poor English, not about other's. >>It's about my poor English, not about others.For this reason, I really like to learn and study English, and hope to enjoy all contents from this website. >>Correct!

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