The first day of educational course. 2

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. The baby has just had his bottle of milk. He must be hungry ! 2. You have lived here for so many years. You must know a lot of people ! 3. He has been on duty all night. He must be exhausted. 4. She always makes people repeat. She must be a bit deaf. 5. I wonder who is at the door. It can't be Doris, she is still at work. So, I could eat breakfast in a restaurant. Some of side dishes were not delicious. I thought It doen't deserve its price. Of course it doesn't till now. I think the manager of restaurant should give us some money back or meat side dish. There was no meat!!!! It was unsane, nonsense. Anyway, before our class started, we had a brief ceremony to enter the course, andthen we started our class. like other company, It is very important to learn about edge cutting technic. We have to think up that how to adapt to the theory in our situation or workplace. I learned the one of fourteen of the course but I hardly remember it.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday Andrson! I think the manager should because you are not satisfied. They should have a survey on how to improve their food or services. Why don\'t you try to suggest it. Hihihihi! It\'s nice that you learned something. Keep it up! Teacher Nina   1. The baby has just had his bottle of milk. He must be hungry ! >> Correct!2. You have lived here for so many years. You must know a lot of people ! >> Correct!3. He has been on duty all night. He must be exhausted. >> Correct!4. She always makes people repeat. She must be a bit deaf. >> Correct!5. I wonder who is at the door. It can\'t be Doris, she is still at work. >> Correct!So, I could eat breakfast in a restaurant. >> Correct! Some of side dishes were not delicious. >> Some of the side dishes were not delicious. I thought It doen\'t deserve its price. >> I think the price was not worthit. Of course it doesn\'t till now. >> Of course, it doesn\'t until now. >> OR: Of course, it doesn\'t until this time. I think the manager of restaurant should give us some money back or meat side dish. >> I think the manager of the restaurant should give us some of our money back or a meat side dish instead. There was no meat!!!! >> Correct! It was unsane, nonsense. >> Correct! Anyway, before our class started, we had a brief ceremony to enter the course, andthen we started our class. >> Anyway, before our class started, we had a brief introducton about the course, and then we started our class.like other company, It is very important to learn about edge cutting technic. >> Like in the other company, it is very important to learn about edge cutting techniques. We have to think up that how to adapt to the theory in our situation or workplace. >> Correct! I learned the one of fourteen of the course but I hardly remember it. >> I learned one of hte fourteen chapters of the course but I hardly remember it.

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