The first day of educational course.

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Linda has a white cat and a black cat. > She has two cats. 2. A dog is bigger than a mouse, but smaller than an elephant. > An elephant is bigger than a dog. 3. Andrea is looking after the children. > She is taking care of the children. 4. What does Vonica like? > What are her favorite things? 5. She can hardly see it. > She sees very hard. > She is hard with it. > She cannot see it very well. > It is hard to see her. The first day of educational course was started. because there wasn't any directions or explanation about this course, I felt confused and didn't have any idea what I have to do or where I can eat a breakfast. I was looking for restaurant and our class room for a long time. the place where I attend the course seems like a huge factory, so I almost lost my way and there was no other choice but I had to drive a car, searching for the place thoroughly. Finally I found the class room and I spent nearly 20minutes searching for it.

강사 첨삭

Good day! Thanks for doing your homework. You did a lot. Hihihihi! I appreciate it a lot. Wow! Twenty minutes? It was good that you were able to find it. Talk to you soon. Teacher Nina   1. Linda has a white cat and a black cat.> She has two cats. >> Correct!2. A dog is bigger than a mouse, but smaller than an elephant.> An elephant is bigger than a dog. >> Correct!3. Andrea is looking after the children.> She is taking care of the children. >> Correct!4. What does Vonica like?> What are her favorite things? >> Correct! >> OR: What are her interests?5. She can hardly see it.> She sees very hard.> She is hard with it.> She cannot see it very well. >> Correct!> It is hard to see her. >> She can\'t barely see it.The first day of educational course was started. >> The first day of the educational course started. because there wasn\'t any directions or explanation about this course, >> But there weren\'t any directions or explanation about this course. I felt confused and didn\'t have any idea what I have to do or where I can eat a breakfast. >> Correct! I was looking for restaurant and our class room for a long time. >> Correct!the place where I attend the course seems like a huge factory, so I almost lost my way and there was no other choice but I had to drive a car, searching for the place thoroughly. >> Correct! Finally I found the class room and I spent nearly 20minutes searching for it. >> Finally I found the class room and I spent about 20 minutes searching for it.

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