The first day of educational course.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Linda has a white cat and a black cat.
> She has two cats.
2. A dog is bigger than a mouse, but smaller than an elephant.
> An elephant is bigger than a dog.
3. Andrea is looking after the children.
> She is taking care of the children.
4. What does Vonica like?
> What are her favorite things?
5. She can hardly see it.
> She sees very hard.
> She is hard with it.
> She cannot see it very well.
> It is hard to see her.
The first day of educational course was started.
because there wasn't any directions or explanation about this course,
I felt confused and didn't have any idea what I have to do or where I can eat a breakfast. I was looking for restaurant and our class room for a long time.
the place where I attend the course seems like a huge factory, so I almost lost my way and there was no other choice but I had to drive a car, searching for the place thoroughly. Finally I found the class room and I spent nearly 20minutes searching for it.
강사 첨삭
Good day!
Thanks for doing your homework.
You did a lot. Hihihihi! I appreciate it a lot.
Wow! Twenty minutes? It was good that you were able to find it.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
1. Linda has a white cat and a black cat.> She has two cats.
>> Correct!2. A dog is bigger than a mouse, but smaller than an elephant.> An elephant is bigger than a dog.
>> Correct!3. Andrea is looking after the children.> She is taking care of the children.
>> Correct!4. What does Vonica like?> What are her favorite things?
>> Correct!
>> OR: What are her interests?5. She can hardly see it.> She sees very hard.> She is hard with it.> She cannot see it very well. >> Correct!> It is hard to see her.
>> She can\'t barely see it.The first day of educational course was started.
>> The first day of the educational course started. because there wasn\'t any directions or explanation about this course,
>> But there weren\'t any directions or explanation about this course. I felt confused and didn\'t have any idea what I have to do or where I can eat a breakfast.
>> Correct!
I was looking for restaurant and our class room for a long time.
>> Correct!the place where I attend the course seems like a huge factory, so I almost lost my way and there was no other choice but I had to drive a car, searching for the place thoroughly.
>> Correct!
Finally I found the class room and I spent nearly 20minutes searching for it.
>> Finally I found the class room and I spent about 20 minutes searching for it.
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