The first day of school.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't remember my first day of school exactly because
It has been a long time after graduating from school.
I am going to tell you the first day of university.
I was nervous because it was the first time I had been away from
my family for a long time.
I met many people in the class room.
and I also met professors there.
Since it was the first day, we didn't have a class.
we just introduced each other.
After that, we went to a bar to drink.
I was happy coz all people were nice.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
Thanks for this composition. You did a great job my dear [이름].
You had a very memorable time
in your University. Take care See you later!
-Camille-
I don't remember my first day of school exactly because It has been a long time after graduating from school.
>>I don't exactly remember my first day in school because it has been a long time after graduating from school.I am going to tell you the first day of university.
>>I am going to tell you about my first day in the University.I was nervous because it was the first time I had been away from my family for a long time.
>>CorrectI met many people in the classroom.
>>CorrectAnd I also met professors there.
>>CorrectSince it was the first day, we didn't have a class.
>>Correctwe just introduced each other.
>>We just introduced ourselves to each other.After that, we went to a bar to drink.
>> After that we went to a bar for a drink.I was happy coz all people were nice.
>>Correct
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