The first day of school.

2010-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I don't remember my first day of school exactly because It has been a long time after graduating from school. I am going to tell you the first day of university. I was nervous because it was the first time I had been away from my family for a long time. I met many people in the class room. and I also met professors there. Since it was the first day, we didn't have a class. we just introduced each other. After that, we went to a bar to drink. I was happy coz all people were nice.

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Hi there [이름],    Thanks for this composition. You did a great job my dear [이름]. You had a very memorable time in your University. Take care See you later! -Camille- I don't remember my first day of school exactly because It has been a long time after graduating from school. >>I don't exactly remember my first day in school  because it has been a long time after graduating from school.I am going to tell you the first day of university. >>I am going to tell you about my first day in the University.I was nervous because it was the first time I had been away from my family for a long time. >>CorrectI met many people in the classroom. >>CorrectAnd I also met professors there. >>CorrectSince it was the first day, we didn't have a class. >>Correctwe just introduced each other. >>We just introduced ourselves to each other.After that, we went to a bar to drink. >> After that we went to a bar for a drink.I was happy coz all people were nice. >>Correct

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