The first impression is strong enough to determine everything of a person, but I think we need not t
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The first impression is strong enough to determine everything of a person, but I think we need not to blindly trust others\' first impression. First of all, the first impression is usually all about the appearance of the counterpart. We shouldn\'t judge somebody with their appearances since their appearances can\'t express all of them. Moreover, if we blindly trust our first impression of others, this behavior will incite \'lookism\'. Secondly, a long relationship doesn\'t build in a moment. It depends on how well they fit in each other after a long time. Lastly, everything is changing. That person can be changed every day by being affected by various influences in different environments, even if the first impression is strong enough to determine somebody. Also, our emotions towards that person can be changed over time. Therefore, we don\'t have to trust our first impression for 3 core reasons.
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Hi Jenny! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate the consistency and effort you put in it! ^^
Yes, first impressions don\'t last so they say and I definitely agree. First impressions could be superficial, general and inaccurate. ^ ^ Just because your first encounter with a person didn\'t suit your standards or your expectations doesn\'t mean that it\'s all going to be that. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
First of all, the first impression is usually all about the appearance of the counterpart.
>>CORRECT
We shouldn\'t judge somebody with their appearances since their appearances can\'t express all of them.
>>CORRECT OR
>>Appearance doesn\'t tell everything about a person.
Moreover, if we blindly trust our first impression of others, this behavior will incite \'lookism\'.
>>CORRECT
Secondly, a long relationship doesn\'t build in a moment.
>>Secondly, a long relationship is not built in a short period of time.
It depends on how well they fit in each other after a long time.
>>It depends on how well they suit each other in a given period of time.
Lastly, everything is changing.
>>CORRECT
That person can be changed every day by being affected by various influences in different environments, even if the first impression is strong enough to determine somebody.
>>CORRECT
Also, our emotions towards that person can be changed over time.
>>CORRECT
Therefore, we don\'t have to trust our first impression for 3 core reasons.
>>CORRECT (or based on these three core reasons.
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