The first impression which i looked for the first time
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. Sometimes, looks can be very deceiving. I don\'t know how you look like, but just basing from your voice, you sound very gentle and maybe a bit timid.
- T. Beth
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The people who I met for the first time usually talked about me that I look like really quiet and kind.
>>> The people who I met for the first time usually tell me that I look really quiet and kind.
When I was in high school the friends who were getting closure always told me you are really different from the first impression.
>>> When I was in high school the friends who I got close with always told me that I was really different from their first impression.
They thought I am really gentle and decent.
>>> correct
However, I was really cheerful and talk to you so many people were confused which is the real me.
>>> However, I was really cheerful and talkative so many people were confused which is the real me.
Also now, the people who i am not close, they usually think of me who is really quiet and neat.
>>> Also now, the people who I am not close with usually think of me as really quiet and neat.
It might be the impression of my face is neat and tidy.
>>> It might be because of my face, they get an impression that I am neat and tidy.
But when I talk with people, they realize that I am not the kind of person.
>>> But when I talk with people, they realize that I am not that kind of person.
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