The first impression which i looked for the first time

2019-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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The people who I met for the first time usually talked about me that I look like really quiet and kind. When I was in high school the friends who were getting closure always told me you are really different from the first impression. They thought I am really gentle and decent. However, I was really cheerful and talk to you so many people were confused which is the real me. Also now, the people who i am not close, they usually think of me who is really quiet and neat. It might be the impression of my face is neat and tidy. But when I talk with people, they realize that I am not the kind of person.

강사 첨삭

Hello  [이름]. Thank you once again for this. Sometimes, looks can be very deceiving. I don\'t know how you look like, but just basing from your voice, you sound very gentle and maybe a bit timid.

- T. Beth

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The people who I met for the first time usually talked about me that I look like really quiet and kind.

>>>  The people who I met for the first time usually tell me that I look really quiet and kind. 

When I was in high school the friends who were getting closure always told me you are really different from the first impression.

>>>  When I was in high school the friends who I got close with always told me that I was really different from their first impression.

They thought I am really gentle and decent.

>>>  correct

However, I was really cheerful and talk to you so many people were confused which is the real me.

>>> However, I was really cheerful and talkative so many people were confused which is the real me.  

Also now, the people who i am not close, they usually think of me who is really quiet and neat.

>>> Also now, the people who I am not close with usually think of me as really quiet and neat.   

It might be the impression of my face is neat and tidy.

>>> It might be because of my face, they get an impression that I am neat and tidy. 

But when I talk with people, they realize that I am not the kind of person.

>>> But when I talk with people, they realize that I am not that kind of person. 


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