the first month of the year

2011-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is the 15th of january by the lunar calendar. So we prepared lots of things for that day like nuts, traditional drinks, 5 kind of rice, vegitables and so on. They has meanings. First 5 kind of rice and some vagetables means that it make us strong and we can get over summer temperature. It also recover our body condition that we lose during winter. second nuts it makes our teeth strong for a year and it prevent lots of allergies. Last drinks make our ears clear that can hear easyly. And we have lots of actions when that day come. Welcomming first moon when we see full moon you can pray what you want and your wishes. other one is walk on the bridge you can walk as your age it means repulse bad luck ,welcome lucky. There are lots of tradition. it's going to be disappered.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! You have here an interesting composition. I didn't know that Korea have this kind of tradition. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. Take care. See you tomorrow. Lei J   Today is the 15th of january by the lunar calendar. >>Today is the 15th day of January in the Lunar calendar. So we prepared lots of things for this day like nuts, traditional drinks, 5 kinds of rice, vegetables and so on. >>correct They has meanings. >>They have there own symbols. First 5 kind of rice and some vagetables means that it make us strong and we can get over summer temperature. >>The 5 kinds of rice and vegetables will make us strong and we can get over the summer temperature. It also recover our body condition that we lose during winter. >>It is also for our body to recover our body condition that was lost last winter. second nuts it makes our teeth strong for a year and it prevent lots of allergies. >>Secondly, the nuts makes our teeth strong for one year and it will prevent different kinds of allergies. Last drinks make our ears clear that can hear easyly. >>Lastly, the drinks can clear the ears for us to easily hear sounds. And we have lots of actions when that day comes. >>correct Welcomming first moon when we see full moon you can pray what you want and your wishes. >>We can make wishes and pray for our hopes as we welcome the first full moon of the year. other one is walk on the bridge you can walk as your age it means repulse bad luck ,welcome lucky >>Another tradition is crossing the bridge according to your age. It means repulsing the bad luck and welcoming the good luck.

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