The first step for my Working Holiday.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It seems you\'ve got a full day ahead even if it\'s your holiday today. Well, I hope you can do as much work as you can this day. Take it easy though. See you in class later.
T. Alice
Hi, teacher.
>>Hi teacher.
It became much wormer.
>>It became much warmer.
>>It got much warmer.
How about teacher?.^^
>>How about in the Philippines?
>>How about there?
Of course, a few miniutes ago, I saw forcasting news to say like this \" It will be much freezing from Tomorrow\".
>>Of course, a few minutes ago, I watched the weather forecast and it said, \" It will be freezing cold more from tomorrow\".
It\'s a rather bad news, but you know... today is today, tomorrow is tomorrow.
>>Correct!
I will enjoy today to the utmost.
>>Correct!
Actually, I can use all day freely because today is really holiday like the name of s title metioned above.
>>Actually, I\'m free today because today is really a holiday for me just as I\'ve said on the title mentioned above.
So, I decided to start to finish off my arrears of work such as making VISA card in bank and buying some cosmetics to replace my depleted lotion etc.
>>So, I decided to start to finish off my arrears at work such as making VISA card in the bank and buying some cosmetics to replace my depleted lotion etc.
Among these many works, before typing this letter, virtually I terminate my one of works, making VISA card.
>>Before typing this letter, I had to delay making my VISA card.
It was a rather simple task than I thought.
>>It was a rather simpler task than I thought.
And after doing my homework, I will apply for my visa for working holiday program to departure to Austraila.
>>And after doing my homework, I will apply for my visa for a working holiday program for Australia.
I have never been experienced like this and it seems to be rater complexed process, i\'m plan to deal with it alone without other agent help.
>> I have never experienced this and it seems to be a rather complex process. I plan to deal with it alone without the help of an agent .
I believe that it will make my first step more rigidly.
I believe that it will make my first step more rigidly.
>> I believe that it will make the first step more rigid.
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