the first sunset

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I have gone to see the first sunset on 2020.

>> Correct
 That day ago, I heard to raise the sun at 7:30 AM.

>> The day before New year, I hear that the sun rises at 7:30 AM.
 So, I woke up at 6:00 AM and then I started to go to the beach near my new house.

>> Correct
 When I entered the highway, I was surprised because there were already many cars although it wasn’t traffic.

>> Correct
 It took about 25 minutes by my car.

>> Correct
 When I arrived in the beach, there were also many persons.

>> When I arrived at the beach, there were also many people.
 I walked in the beach and took a photo while I listened to the wave sound for 40 minutes because I felt so cold.

>>  I walked at the beach and took photos while I listened to the sound of the wave for 40 minutes because I felt so cold.
 When I watched the position which the sun would raised, there were cloudy a little.

>> When I watched the direction where the sun would rise, it was a bit cloudy.
 So I worried that I couldn’t see the first sun on 2020.

>> So, I got worried that I won\'t be able to see the first sun rise of 2020.
 Since the time pasted at 7:30 AM, finally I couldn’t see the sun.

>> When it was passed 7:30 AM, I really couldn\'t see the sun.
 But I was satisfied because I saw the beautiful sky and the nice background before the sun raised.

>> But I was satisfied because I saw a beautiful sky and a nice background before sun rise.