The fondest childhood memory
학생이 쓴 원문
My fondest memory is the time when i had been living with my family(my mother,father and sisters).
Whenever i watch my children, they remind me of my childhood. For exampIe, I and my sisters liked movies so we watched dvds until the dawn and we followed the actors\'s action like kung fu. So my parents worried about us getting hurt. And nowadays as my children did something similar as i had done, it makes me smile and somtimes I miss my childhood.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you or this. I hope you did have a happy childhood.
- T, Beth
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>>> correct
>>> OR: My fondest memory was the time when I had been living with my family.
Whenever i watch my children, they remind me of my childhood.
>>> correct ( Whenever I watch my children, they remind me of my childhood. )
For exampIe, I and my sisters liked movies so we watched dvds until the dawn and we followed the actors\'s action like kung fu.
>>> For exampIe, I and my sisters liked movies so we watched DVD\'s until the dawn and we followed the actors\'s action like kung fu.
So my parents worried about us getting hurt.
>>> correct
And nowadays as my children did something similar as i had done, it makes me smile and somtimes I miss my childhood.
>>> Nowadays, as my children did something similar as I had done, it makes me smile and I sometimes miss my childhood.
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