The food I want to serve if I have my own restaurant
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to serve Korean food. Korean food has good nutrients and I like Korean food the most. I want to make it great and serve to other people. I hope that many people can enjoy Korean food easily.
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Hi [이름]! That sounds nice! I love those kinds of food as well. You made me hungry while reading your answer. Hahahaha!
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I would like to serve Korean food.
>>CORRECT
Korean food has good nutrients and I like Korean food the most.
>>Korean food have good nutrients and I like it the most.
I want to make it great and serve to other people.
>> I want to make sure that it tastes great and serve it to other people.
I hope that many people can enjoy Korean food easily.
>> CORRECT
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