The food makes me feel at home
학생이 쓴 원문
The food makes me feel at home is tteokbokki. It tastes spicy so it makes me feel better. I always craving for tteokbbokki when I’m stressed. It has high calorie so I have to endure when I’m on a diet. I think I can’t succeed my diet because of that.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow! That sounds delicious. I wish I could also tteokbokki. I have been dreaming of trying it somedays because most of my student recommend it to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing.
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The food makes me feel at home is tteokbokki.
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It tastes spicy so it makes me feel better.
>>CORRECT
I always craving for tteokbbokki when I’m stressed.
>> CORRECT
It has high calorie so I have to endure when I’m on a diet.
>>CORRECT
I think I can’t succeed my diet because of that.
>> I think I can\'t be successful on my diet because of it.
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