The food that I can\'t understand why people enjoy
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I like eating, but the one food that I don\'t enjoy is \'cheese\'. I understand that lots of people enjoy eating cheese with wine or just itself. However, I can\'t forget the moment when I first tried cheese. It was too stinky and felt like I\'m eating a rotten food. I hope one day someone can make the cheese that has no stinky smell.
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Good evening, Melody!
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While cheese is a global staple, many people find it unpleasant or even repulsive.
Many people associate the scent of certain cheeses with body odor or vomit. This is because the fermentation process yields comparable chemical molecules, such as butyric acid.
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I like eating, but the one food that I don\'t enjoy is \'cheese\'.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I like eating, but one thing that I dislike is \'cheese\'.
I understand that lots of people enjoy eating cheese with wine or just itself.
>>> I understand that many people prefer eating cheese with wine or by itself.
However, I can\'t forget the moment when I first tried cheese.
>>> However, I cannot forget the first time I tried cheese.
It was too stinky and felt like I\'m eating a rotten food.
>>> It was too stinky, and I felt as if I was eating rotting food.
I hope one day someone can make the cheese that has no stinky smell.
>>> I hope that one day someone will be able to manufacture cheese that doesn\'t stink.
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