The Fourth topic is about learn to english

2013-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

The Fourth topic is about learn to english I has been learning english during 8 years. But I could'nt free speanking english. I thought that the korean's curriculum was wrong with something. Of couse, I did not hard study to learn english. but how could not me to speak english? Here are my method for the better to do than english. 1.Speaking english to my faimily in our house. 2.Speaking a new sentence everyday. 3.I don't care even though I was incorrect to speak english. Will I do well?

강사 첨삭

Hi there MISS [이름]^^ Thank you for sending this in. ^^ I had a great time reading it. I am sure that you will be able to reach your goals in due time. You just have to practice often. I know you can do it! Please go over the corrections I provided for you. If you have any questions, just feel free to raise it in class. Have a great night! See you! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: The Fourth topic is about learn to english >> The fourth topic of my composition is about how to learn Englsh.I has been learning english during 8 years. >> I\'ve been learning English for eight years now. OR >> I\'ve been studying English for eight years now. But I could\'nt free speanking english. >> But I couldn\'t express my self in English well. OR >> But I couldn\'t have a free conversation in English. I thought that the korean\'s curriculum was wrong with something. >> I thought that there was something wrong with Korean\'s curriculum. OR >> I thought that Korean\'s curriculum has a problem.Of couse, I did not hard study to learn english. but how could not me to speak english? >> I didn\'t study English hard so how could I speak in English fluently? Here are my method for the better to do than english. >> Here are the my methods for me to have a better English skills.1.Speaking english to my faimily in our house. >> Speaking in English to my family at home.2.Speaking a new sentence everyday. >> Composing new sentences everyday.3.I don\'t care even though I was incorrect to speak english. >> I don\'t care even though I was incorrect in speaking in English.Will I do well? >> Correct!

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