The Fox and the Crow

Hello Sarah!

I think you like reading short stories and fables. :p

Have you tried writing a story?

I think you\'ll be able to write a good story. :p

I look forward to reading other stories that you\'ll send me.

I think you\'re translating the stories from Korean to English, am I right?

That is one good way of applying what you have learned. :p

Please review the corrections below, my dear. 

If you have any questions about my corrections, you can ask during our class. :p

Enjoy your evening!

See yah on Friday.

~~T. Heidi _^-^_

One day, a crow found the meat on the ground, and she picked up the meat!

>>>One day, a crow found a meat on the ground and she picked it up.
She sit on the branch and ate!

>>>She sat on a branch and started to eat.
But smart fox saw a crow with meat!

>>>But a clever fox saw the crow with the meat!
He was very hungry!

>>>Correct!
So, He made her speaking and the meat fell down!

>>>So he made her speak and the meat fell down!
He picked up and runs away!

>>>He picked it up and run away.
Now, she knew he was so smart and she was silly,,,

>>>Now she knew that he\'s clever while she\'s silly...
How pitful she is!!

>>>How pitiful she is!!
I\'m not decieve my brother\'s tricks again like crow!

>>>I won\'t fall for my brother\'s tricks again just like what happened to the crow.
Next time, I will be a smart fox!!!

>>>Next time, I will be the clever fox!!!