The freedom of a road trip
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been on a road trip before.
That is exciting.
Because of I can see the beautiful scenery outside the window, and get good air and wind if I open the window.
The best part of it is that I can park my car and enjoy anywhere I want.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, Ms. [이름]!
It seems like you had enjoyed your road trip. Please be cautious on your verb tenses. You were great! Ciao!
~Teacher Eunice
I have been on a road trip before.
>>> Correct!
That is exciting.
>>> That was exciting.
Because of I can see the beautiful scenery outside the window, and get good air and wind if I open the window.
>>> Because I can see the beautiful scenery outside the window, and get good air and wind if I open the window.
The best part of it is that I can park my car and enjoy anywhere I want.
>>> Correct!
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