The Gattong story.

2010-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

I told you that I have a car, named gattong, and you were surprised.^^ I named a car as Gattong because I [이름] her with difficulty. About one years ago, I want to buy a car. My office was placed in unconvinient transportation area. Even though I decided to buy a car my father against buying a car. So I could not help seeking a cheap car by my self. At that time, My boy friend consoled me and looked all around for a affordable car for me. Finally he found a second-handed car and I loved at first sight. (Once upon a time korean people called their child 'Gattong' in childhood, it means health and long life, actually it means dog poop.) I wish to go-together with her for a long time. That's why I called her as 'Gattong'

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Wow, I didn't know that there was a beautiful story behind your car. I was really surprised when you told that she has a name because as I have said I am only used to men naming their cars. But I am happy for you. I wish I could have my own car too in the near future. Thank you for sharing this story. Have a great weekend J and see you again on Monday!!! Lei :-)   I told you that I have a car, named gattong, and you were surprised.^^ >>correctI named a car as Gattong because I [이름] her with difficulty.>>correctAbout one years ago, I want to buy a car.>>about a year ago, I wanted to buy a car.My office was placed in unconvinient transportation area.>>my office was located where the transportation is so incovenient.Even though I decided to buy a car my father against buying a car.>>Even though I decided to buy a car my father is against it.So I could not help seeking a cheap car by my self.>>So I didn't have a choice but to look for a cheap car for myself.At that time, My boy friend consoled me and looked all around for a affordable car for me.>>at that time, my boyfriend consoled me and looked around for an affordable car.Finally he found a second-handed car and I loved it at first sight.>>correct(Once upon a time korean people called their child 'Gattong' >>correctin childhood, it means health and long life, >>correctactually it means dog poop.)>>correctI wish to go-together with her for a long time.>>correctThat's why I called her as 'Gattong' >>correct

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