The general problems a writer faces in writing
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The first issue that writers encounter in writing is data research. If you pass it by without researching or use incorrect information when you need to research essential information in a novel, there can be major errors in the novel. Secondly, the speed of events is the issue. If you proceed too quickly, you will have a problem that the reader does not understand, and if you slow down the process too much, the reader may be bored.
강사 첨삭
The first issue that writers encounter in writing is data research.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The first issue writers encounter is research.
If you pass it by without researching or use incorrect information when you need to research essential information in a novel, there can be major errors in the novel.
>> If you skip research or use incorrect information while writing a novel, major errors can occur.
Secondly, the speed of events is the issue.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Secondly, pacing is an issue.
If you proceed too quickly, you will have a problem that the reader does not understand, and if you slow down the process too much, the reader may be bored.
>> If the story moves too quickly, readers may not understand it; if it moves too slowly, they may get bored.
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