The Global Sport, Tae Kwon Do

Tae Kwon Do is our traditional sport in Korea. It makes strong our body and mind. It has kind of colors on the belt. It means skill level! I want to Tae Kwon Do is popular sport all over the world.

Hello there!Thank you for this composition you made! I\'m impressed with the effort you always give to learn and improve. Keep up the good work and never stop learning. I know you can be better once you do constant practice! Anyway, I agree to you! Tae Kwon Do is really a good sport, not only for Koreans but for many people in the world. That sport is also famous in my country! Many parents let their children register to Tae Kwon Do classes which is really good for our body. Moreover, I\'ll just talk with you about this in class later! See you and have a great Monday ahead! ~ T. Meg ~  Tae Kwon Do is our traditional sport in Korea.>> Correct! It makes strong our body and mind. >> It makes us have strong body and mind. >> It makes our body and mind strong.It has kind of colors on the belt. >> If you do tae kwon do, you can have belts with different colors.It means skill level! >> Correct OR>> It emphasizes your rank! >> It shows your rank in the group!I want to Tae Kwon Do is popular sport all over the world. >> I want Tae Kwon Do to become very popular all over the world.