The good behavior is helping for someone who need help
학생이 쓴 원문
The good behaviors are making better you and your around people
helping someone and to advice to someone who need it
Give people the encourage that is also kind of a good behavior
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. I agree with most of what you said. Having good behavior affects not just the person practicing it but the people that person interacts with. Great job and let\'s talk again tomorrow. Have a good night. ~Jane c\",)
The good behavior is helping for someone who need help
>>> Good behavior is helpful for someone who needs help.
The good behaviors are making better you and your around people
>>> Having a good behavior will make you better and the people around you.
helping someone and to advice to someone who need it
>>> It is also helping someone and giving advice to someone who needs it.
Give people the encourage that is also kind of a good behavior
>>> Giving people encouragement is also a kind of good behavior.
>>> OR: Encouraging people is also a form of good behavior.
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