The greatest lesson I\'ve got last year(1)

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Great composition!

I agree that we continuously learn lesson about our life along the way.

Keep up the great work!

Your sentence structures are amazing!

~Teacher Eve.

We learn about our life until we die.

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It means we can get a lesson about life anywhere, anytime.

>> It means that we can get lessons about life anywhere, anytime.

I also learned how to live well last year.

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 Last year, I prepared an university entrance exam.

>> Last year, I prepared a university entrance exam.

This exam is valued in Korea because many Koreans regard academic background as one of the most important elements in our life.

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>> OR: This exam is valuable in Korea because many Koreans thought of academic background as one of the most important elements in our life.

Therefore, I got a lot of burden.

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 Studying from morning to night was really hard.

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I had to study, study, and study.

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My everyday life was amazingly boring.

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>> OR: My everyday life was frequently boring.

However, I did my best and I got the first place in our school(regular exam; It is reflected when students go to university).

>> However, I did my best and I got first place in our school (regular exam; It is reflected when students go to university).
 Unfortunately, I couldn\'t get a good score at the final exam(called Suneung in Korea).

>> Unfortunately, I couldn\'t get a good score during the final exam (called Suneung in Korea).

The main reason was lack of preparation.

>> The main reason was the lack of preparation.

Then, why couldn\'t I prepare it well?

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Because my health became worse.

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I had to study at school until 10 pm.

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When I went home, I studied again and watched Youtube clips to release my stress.

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Therefore, I went to bad too late.

>> Therefore, I went to bed late.