The Greatest Life Value is Our Health

\"Losing your health, losing everything.\" We usually hear the famous sentence in our daily lives. I agree with the saying, because I have a direct experience. when I was 25 years old, I decided to lose my weight. I blindly started a extreme diet, At last, I succeeded. At that time, My heights is 165cm but the weight is only 43kg. I thought that losing weight brought me a big delight. but that\'s a misjudgement. The way of wrong diet reduce amount of muscle critically and It made me hard to walk even a few minutes. I always lay on the bed most of the day. I don \'t was no energy, no joy, no value and no worth. Consequantially the physical health had a strong influence on the mental health. Life of losing health is not diffrent from the walking dead. Now, I am happy even though I don\'t have model size body. I already got a valuable lesson of relationship between health and life.

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The Greatest Life Value is Our Health

\"Losing your health, losing everything.\"

>>\"Losing your health means losing everything.\"

or>>\"Losing your health is tantamount to losing everything.\"

We usually hear the famous sentence in our daily lives.

>>We usually hear this famous expression in our daily lives.

I agree with the saying, because I have a direct experience.

CORRECT!

or>>I agree with this expression because I had a very personal experience.

when I was 25 years old, I decided to lose my weight.

>>When I was 25 years old, I decided to lose some weight.

I blindly started a extreme diet,

>>I blindly started an extreme diet,

At last, I succeeded.

CORRECT!

or>>I finally succeeded in achieving this goal.

At that time, My heights is 165cm but the weight is only 43kg.

>>At that time, my height was 165 cm but my weight was only 43 kg.

I thought that losing weight brought me a big delight.

>>I thought that losing weight will bring me great joy.

but that\'s a misjudgement.

>>But it\'s a huge misjudging on my part.

The way of wrong diet reduce amount of muscle critically and It made me hard to walk even a few minutes.

>>A wrong diet reduces a large mass of critical muscles and It gave me a hard time in walking, even for just a few minutes.

I always lay on the bed most of the day.

CORRECT!

or>>I mostly just lie down in bed most of the time.

I don \'t was no energy, no joy, no value and no worth.

>>I didn’t have a lot of energy, I had no joy, and I felt of no value and of now worth.

Consequantially the physical health had a strong influence on the mental health.

>>Consequently, one’s physical health will have a strong influence on one’s mental health.

Life of losing health is not diffrent from the walking dead.

>>A life with a poor health is no different from the walking dead.

Now, I am happy even though I don\'t have model size body.

>>Now, I am happy even though I don\'t have a model’s body.

I already got a valuable lesson of relationship between health and life.

>>I already got a valuable lesson about the relationship between health and life.