The greatest threat to the environment

I think that the most two important things for the environment are air and water. We can not do without them even a day. We breath air and drink water every day. So, the qualities of the air and water directly affect our health. Recently, it is not difficult to see news on the air and water pollution. As they have been polluted due to many reasons, environment will gradually degenerate without our consciousness. For instance, building heavy chemical factories and constructing cities might ruin air and water. In fact, we seldom feel it. Just numbers in a technical report tell us that air and water are getting sick. Unless we fix this vicious circle, our descendant will inherit the unhealthy environment inevitably. Politician, researcher and normal people have to cooperate to make our environment more clean. To turn clean air and water over our children, we should protect the nature as well as make an effort to purify them. That is definitely our mission as an ancestor.

Hi, [이름]!   I\'m amazed on how you expressed your opinions regarding this matter. Very well said. I definitely agree with you in protecting our environment. Imposing more rules on how to protect our environment can be a great help. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it. ^^   _Teacher Dianne   I think that the most two important things for the environment are air and water. >> Correct We can not do without them even a day. >> We cannot do something without them even a day. We breath air and drink water every day. >> We breathe air and drink water every day. (breath is a noun...breathe is a verb) So, the qualities of the air and water directly affect our health. >> Correct Recently, it is not difficult to see news on the air and water pollution. >> Correct >> Or: Recently, it is not difficult to see news about the air and water pollution. As they have been polluted due to many reasons, environment will gradually degenerate without our consciousness. >> Correct For instance, building heavy chemical factories and constructing cities might ruin air and water. >> Correct >> Or: For instance, building large chemical factories and constructing cities might ruin air and water. In fact, we seldom feel it. >> Correct Just numbers in a technical report tell us that air and water are getting sick. >> Correct >> Or: Just numbers in a technical report tell us that air and water are seriously being infected. Unless we fix this vicious circle, our descendant will inherit the unhealthy environment inevitably. >> Unless we fix this vicious circle, our descendants will inherit the unhealthy environment inevitably. Politician, researcher and normal people have to cooperate to make our environment more clean. >> Politicians, researchers, and normal people have to cooperate to make our environment cleaner. To turn clean air and water over our children, we should protect the nature as well as make an effort to purify them. >> Correct That is definitely our mission as an ancestor. >> Correct