The Greek myths

The Greek myths are the ancient stories of greek gods who live in Olympus. In Greek myths, the king of the god is Zeus and his wife is Hera and there are many gods such as Aphrodite, Apollo, Athena and Hades. Besides, there are many heros like Heracles or Achilles. It has influenced on western society for a long time. A lot of art and literature focused on the Geek myths. For example, “The Iliad” and "Odyssey" which are written by Homer are the most famous work focused on the greek gods. I like it because there are many romantic love stories and some heros in the myths. In my opinion, it's very exiting and it has the value of being handed down for thousands years.

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sending the composition. Please take note of the corrections below. :D -Faye The Greek myths are the ancient stories of greek gods who live in Olympus. >>CORRECT >> Greek myths are ancient stories of greek gods who lived in Olympus. [better] In Greek myths, the king of the god is Zeus and his wife is Hera and there are many gods such as Aphrodite, Apollo, Athena and Hades. >>In Greek mythology the king of the gods is Zues and his wife is Hera, and there are many other gods such as Aphrodite, Apollo, Athena and Hades. Besides, there are many heros like Heracles or Achilles. >>There are also many heroes like Heracles and Achilles. It has influenced on western society for a long time. >>It has influenced the western society [or culture] for a long time.  A lot of art and literature focused on the Geek myths. >>A lot of art and literature have focused on Greek myths [or mythology]. For example, ¡°The Iliad¡± and "Odyssey" which are written by Homer are the most famous work focused on the greek gods. >>For example, “The Iliad” and Odyssey which were written by Homer are the most famous works that focused on greek gods. I like it because there are many romantic love stories and some heros in the myths. >>CORRECT In my opinion, it's very exiting and it has the value of being handed down for thousands years. >>In my opinion, it’s very exciting and it has the value of being handed down for a thousand of years.