The happiest memory of my school says.

2022-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

The happiest memory of my school days is the memory of playing with the college student teacher. I really liked the college student teachers. I will never forget it for the rest of my life. My friends told me they were going to be forgotten soon and I still can\'t forget them.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The happiest memory of my school days is the memory of playing with the college student teacher. 
>>> CORRECT!

I really liked the college student teachers. 
>>> I liked the college student teachers. 

I will never forget it for the rest of my life. 
>>> CORRECT!

My friends told me they were going to be forgotten soon and I still can\'t forget them.
>>>> CORRECT!

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