The happiest time in my life.

2022-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

학생이 쓴 원문

First, when I go Everland, I rode a lot of rides. Second, when I play with my cousin, that\'s happy. Third, when I eat at where popular booth, I am happy. Last, when the day is Saturday, I am happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Wow! You must have had a lot of fun in Everland! Thanks for sharing about things that make you happy. Good job!

~T. Annie

First, when I go Everland, I rode a lot of rides.

>>First, when I went to Everland, I rode a lot of rides.

Second, when I play with my cousin, that\'s happy.

>>Second, when I play with my cousin, that\'s fun.
Third, when I eat at where popular booth, I am happy.

>>Third, when I eat at a popular booth, I feel happy.
Last, when the day is Saturday, I am happy.

>>Correct

OR>>Last but not least, I enjoy Saturdays.

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