The happiest Yes.
학생이 쓴 원문
The happiest yes was when I accepted my husband\'s proposal. When we met at first, I actually suggested that we go on a date. And I was always active and led our date schedules. My husband was thoughtful and a little burdened with developing our relationship and getting married at that time. Because he was concerned about not being ready enough for the future, especially financially. That\'s why when he proposed, I said yes quickly with joy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me how you and your husband got married. I enjoyed listening to it during our class. It\'s nice to know that your relationship is still strong. Also, thank you for completing your homework.
- T. Caitlyn
The happiest yes was when I accepted my husband\'s proposal.
>> My happiest \"yes\" was when I accepted my husband\'s proposal.
When we met at first, I actually suggested that we go on a date.
>> CORRECT
And I was always active and led our date schedules.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I was always active and in charge of organizing our date schedules.
My husband was thoughtful and a little burdened with developing our relationship and getting married at that time.
>> At that time, my husband was thoughtful but also felt a bit burdened by the development of our relationship and the idea of getting married.
Because he was concerned about not being ready enough for the future, especially financially.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why when he proposed, I said yes quickly with joy.
>> CORRECT
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