The happiness for me.
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I think happiness is not special one. I can found it from whenever, wherever in my life. For example, I feel happy when I eat a pizza, and when I watch my favorite TV show. Of course, I can not say that I am not gloomy at all, I believe everybody can found happiness in every situation even if that is tiny. And I am trying to make my life happier by balancing between what I have to do and what I want to do.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T. Gabby :)
I think happiness is not special one.
>> I think happiness is not a special one.
I can found it from whenever, wherever in my life.
>> I can found it whenever and wherever in my life.
For example, I feel happy when I eat a pizza, and when I watch my favorite TV show.
>> Correct.
Of course, I can not say that I am not gloomy at all, I believe everybody can found happiness in every situation even if that is tiny.
>> Of course, I can not say that I am not gloomy at all, I believe everybody can find happiness in every situation even in small things,
And I am trying to make my life happier by balancing between what I have to do and what I want to do.
>> Correct.
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