The hare and the tortoise

The hare and the tortoise are running a race because of hare's conceit. But, the hare is very fast with two big feet! and the tortoise is very slow with heavy shells! When the hare has almost reach the final line, he takes a nap. But, the tortoise run diligently and the tortoise is winner! I try to work diligently like the tortoise and I don't give up my dream because of inferior!

Hello there Sarah! Wow!You chose a very nice story. :p I\'m glad that you also know the moral that we can find in this story. :p You\'re right, it doesn\'t mean that since you\'re at a disadvantage, then you have to give up already. When one is at a disadvantage, it\'s better to persevere and to prove to everyone that you can also do it. :p Anyway, please review the corrections below. :p Always stay safe!See yah on Friday. :p ~~T. Heidi _^-^_ The hare and the tortoise are running a race because of hare\'s conceit. >>>The hare and the tortoise are having a foot race because of the hare\'s conceitedness.But, the hare is very fast with two big feet! >>>The hare is very fast because of it\'s two big feet! and the tortoise is very slow with heavy shells! >>>But the tortoise is very slow because of it\'s heavy shells.When the hare has almost reach the final line, he takes a nap.>>>When the hare is almost on the finish line, he took a nap. But, the tortoise run diligently and the tortoise is winner!>>>But the tortoise run diligently and he won. >>>Better: But the tortoise persevered and he was able to beat the hare. I try to work diligently like the tortoise and I don\'t give up my dream because of inferior! >>>I try to work diligently like the tortoise. I don\'t give up my dreams just because of my inferiority.