The health risks associated with my lifestyle
학생이 쓴 원문
While working in my academy, I sometimes have to finish my supper very quickly. And there are times when I skip my meal or I have late meal. When I have supper too fast or late, I have difficulty digesting food. I used to have severe inflammation on my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has been improved. So I\'m conscious about regular eating. And I practice slow eating.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Gi [이름]!
I feel you! I used to do the same thing because I thought eating quickly would give me more spare time to rest or do other things. However, you’re right; it makes it difficult to digest food and is indeed unhealthy. It’s great that you’re now more conscious about your health.
- T. Caitlyn
While working in my academy, I sometimes have to finish my supper very quickly.
>> CORRECT
And there are times when I skip my meal or I have late meal.
>> And there are times when I skip my meal or have a late meal.
When I have supper too fast or late, I have difficulty digesting food.
>> CORRECT
I used to have severe inflammation on my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has been improved.
>> I used to have severe inflammation in my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has improved.
So I\'m conscious about regular eating.
>> So I’m conscious about eating regularly.
And I practice slow eating.
>> CORRECT
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