The Herb Island

2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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I went to the herb island with my family. In herb island I went to the botanical garden. There are many herb such as lavender, rosemary. And then I went to Santa village. There was so beautiful. I went to venice in herb island, cafe, restaurant and market. However I think best was light festival. Light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice. Although it was tiring, I was so happy.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your stories about your trip. I hope I can see the photos. It would be nicer if I see how the Herb Island looks like. Anyhow, thanks again!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ I went to the herb island with my family. >> I went to the Herb Island with my family. (capitalize the name of the island) In herb island I went to the botanical garden. >> I went to the botanical garden. There are many herb such as lavender, rosemary. >>There were a lot of herbs such as lavender and rosemary. And then I went to Santa village. >> Correct. There was so beautiful. >> It was so beautiful. I went to venice in herb island, cafe, restaurant and market. >> I went to a cafe, restaurant, and market in Venice in Herb Island. However I think best was light festival. >> However, I think the best was the light festival. Light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice. >> The light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice. Although it was tiring, I was so happy. >> Correct.

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