The Herb Island
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I went to the herb island with my family. In herb island I went to the botanical garden. There are many herb such as lavender, rosemary. And then I went to Santa village. There was so beautiful. I went to venice in herb island, cafe, restaurant and market. However I think best was light festival. Light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice. Although it was tiring, I was so happy.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your stories about your trip.
I hope I can see the photos.
It would be nicer if I see how the Herb Island looks like.
Anyhow, thanks again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
I went to the herb island with my family.
>> I went to the Herb Island with my family. (capitalize the name of the island)
In herb island I went to the botanical garden.
>> I went to the botanical garden.
There are many herb such as lavender, rosemary.
>>There were a lot of herbs such as lavender and rosemary.
And then I went to Santa village.
>> Correct.
There was so beautiful.
>> It was so beautiful.
I went to venice in herb island, cafe, restaurant and market.
>> I went to a cafe, restaurant, and market in Venice in Herb Island.
However I think best was light festival.
>> However, I think the best was the light festival.
Light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice.
>> The light that I saw at night was so beautiful and nice.
Although it was tiring, I was so happy.
>> Correct.
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