The herbal clinic
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Today I got acupuncture in the herbal medical clinic because of pain on my right sole. This is the fourth treatment and fortunately my sole is recovering now.
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Today I got acupuncture in the herbal medical clinic because of pain on my right sole.
>>Today, I got an acupuncture at the herbal medical clinic because of a pain on my right sole.
This is the fourth treatment and fortunately, my sole is recovering now.
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or>>This is already my fourth treatment at the clinic. Luckily, my sole is much better now.
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