The history of a country is our existence and foundation.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that history should be maintained by history itself.
Adding something to history and making other changes to history is already lost essential itself meaning.
The history of a country is the existence and cornerstone of people living in the country.
Disappearing history is that I don’t exist.
Therefore, it is very important to protect historic old buildings.
The history absolutely doesn\'t stand in the way of progress.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Very well said.
You outdid yourself this time.
Great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think that history should be maintained by history itself.
>> Correct
Adding something to history and making other changes to history is already lost essential itself meaning.
Adding something to history and making other changes to history is already lost essential itself meaning.
>> Adding something to history and making other changes to history would make it lose its essence.
The history of a country is the existence and cornerstone of people living in the country.
The history of a country is the existence and cornerstone of people living in the country.
>> Correct
Disappearing history is that I don’t exist.
Disappearing history is that I don’t exist.
>> When history disappears, we will also cease to exist.
Therefore, it is very important to protect historic old buildings.
Therefore, it is very important to protect historic old buildings.
>> Correct
The history absolutely doesn\'t stand in the way of progress.
The history absolutely doesn\'t stand in the way of progress.
>> History absolutely doesn\'t stand in the way of progress.
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