The holiday is over

2014-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby :) Finally the holiday is over. Though I stayed in a library all the time. It's destiny of a student. But the fact it was the holiday made me excited. I wish the summer vacation comes soon. Oh, I should go right away. If I'm late, I can't get my seat in the library. Take care :) <Essay> I can make sure that cellphone is the most useful device in the world. We can browse the internet, call friends or family, send a message, etc. There are enormous functions in cellphone. This is why I think cellphone is the most useful.

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Hi [이름]^^   Thanks for having the time to answer the homework before going to the library. I do think a cellphone is very useful. Like for me I have my cellphone all the time I think it\'s the same for most people. Are you like me? ^^   I hope you have a good seat in the library so you can study well.   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   Hi Debby :) >> Hello Debby^^Finally the holiday is over. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s good that the Holiday is done. Though I stayed in a library all the time. It\'s destiny of a student. >> CORRECT OR> It is the destiny of a student to spent a lot of time in the library.But the fact it was the holiday made me excited.>> CORRECT OR> The idea of a holiday made me feel excited.I wish the summer vacation comes soon. >> CORRECT OR> I hope that summer vacation starts soon.Oh, I should go right away. If I\'m late, I can\'t get my seat in the library.>> CORRECT OR> I must go to the library fast if I want to have a seat.Take care :) >> Take lots of care ^^ <Essay>I can make sure that cellphone is the most useful device in the world. >> CORRECT OR> I am pretty sure that a celphone is the most useful gadget in the world.We can browse the internet, call friends or family, send a message, etc. >> CORRECT OR> We can do many things with our phone like browsing the internet, calling friends and sending messages. There are enormous functions in cellphone. This is why I think cellphone is the most useful. >> There are enormous functions in a cellphone. That is why I think a cellphone is the most useful.

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