The homework.

2019-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Good morning, beth. This is my home work. Thank you for your teaching. Have a good day!! Your boss is going on a business trip overseas for a week and left you some work to do while he is gone. There are some instructions about the work that you don\'t understand. What will you do in this situation? I had a simular case. He went on a business trip to US. I needed his orders and advices. You know that we have an email way. So I sent the e-mail. We had different time. Unexpectly, it was helpful. Because If I sent an e-mail, I received the answer when I arrived the company next morning. :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Technology and the internet have made communication much more convenient these days.

- T, Beth

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I had a simular case.

>>> I had a similar case.

He went on a business trip to US.

>>> He went on a business trip to the US.

I needed his orders and advices.

>>> correct

You know that we have an email way.

>>> As you may know, we could use the e-mail.

So I sent the e-mail.

>>> correct

We had different time.

>>> We were in different time zones.

Unexpectly, it was helpful.

>>> Unexpectedly, it was helpful.

Because If I sent an e-mail, I received the answer when I arrived the company next morning. :)

>>> Because when I sent an e-mail, I received the answer when I arrived at the company the next morning. :)

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