The homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. Don\'t worry, I have o way of telling your mom or sister that you didn\'t keep your sister\'s secret. Hahah. However, I believe you had a good reason for telling your mom about it.
- T. Beth
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Bello, beth.
>>> Hello, Beth.
Did you have a good weekand?
>>> Did you have a good weekend?
I am writing this on sunday in department store.
>>> I am writing this on Sunday in a department store.
I watched the movie.
>>> I watched a movie.
The movie name is dumbo.
>>> correct (The movie name is Dumbo.)
>>> OR: The movie is entitled Dumbo.
It was great.
>>> correct
But my daughter wants to get out while watch the movie. ;;;;
>>> OR: But my daughter wants to get out in the middle of watching the movie.
I seduced her by ice-cream.
>>> I tried convincing her by buying her ice cream.
I have been spending good weekand.
>>> I have been spending good weekend.
Have a good day.
>>> correct
> Are you good at keeping confidential information or secrets?
Yes. I am kind of keeping confidential information and secrets.
>>> Yes, I am the kind of person who is good at keeping confidential information and secrets.
But it depends on case.
>>> But it depends on the case.
My mother wants to know about her.
>>> correct
She is kind of doesn’t tell someone about her story.
>>> She is the kind who doesn’t tell someone about her story.
These days, she has been meeting one guys.
>>> These days, she has been meeting one guy.
My mother wonder about that.
>>> My mother wonders about that.
So I asked my sister and I told my mom.
>>> correct
In this case, I didn’t keep the her secrets. :)))
>>> In this case, I didn’t keep her secrets.
Don’t tell her, please.
>>> correct
This my secrets. Hahahah
>>> This my secret.
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