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2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Bello, beth. Did you have a good weekand? I am writing this on sunday in department store. I watched the movie. The movie name is dumbo. It was great. But my daughter wants to get out while watch the movie. ;;;; I seduced her by ice-cream. I have been spending good weekand. Have a good day. > Are you good at keeping confidential information or secrets? Yes. I am kind of keeping confidential information and secrets. But it depends on case. My mother wants to know about her. She is kind of doesn’t tell someone about her story. These days, she has been meeting one guys. My mother wonder about that. So I asked my sister and I told my mom. In this case, I didn’t keep the her secrets. :))) Don’t tell her, please. This my secrets. Hahahah

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Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. Don\'t worry, I have o way of telling your mom or sister that you didn\'t keep your sister\'s secret. Hahah. However, I believe you had a good reason for telling your mom about it.
- T. Beth

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Bello, beth. 

>>> Hello, Beth.  
 Did you have a good weekand?

>>>  Did you have a good weekend?  
 I am writing this on sunday in department store. 

>>>   I am writing this on Sunday in a department store.  
 I watched the movie.

>>> I watched a movie.   
 The movie name is dumbo. 

>>>  correct  (The movie name is Dumbo.)

>>> OR: The movie is entitled Dumbo.   
 It was great.

>>>  correct 

But my daughter wants to get out while watch the movie. ;;;;
>>> OR: But my daughter wants to get out in the middle of watching the movie.  

I seduced her by ice-cream. 

>>>  I tried convincing her by buying her ice cream.  
 I have been spending good weekand. 

>>> I have been spending good weekend.   
 Have a good day.

>>>  correct 


> Are you good at keeping confidential information or secrets?
Yes. I am kind of keeping confidential information and secrets. 

>>> Yes, I am the kind of person who is good at keeping confidential information and secrets.   
 But it depends on case. 

>>>  But it depends on the case.   
 My mother wants to know about her.

>>>  correct  

She is kind of doesn’t tell someone about her story. 

>>> She is the kind who doesn’t tell someone about her story.    
 These days, she has been meeting one guys.

>>>  These days, she has been meeting one guy.  

My mother wonder about that.

>>>   My mother wonders about that. 

So I asked my sister and I told my mom. 

>>>  correct    
 In this case, I didn’t keep the her secrets. :)))

>>> In this case, I didn’t keep her secrets.   
 Don’t tell her, please.

>>>  correct   

This my secrets. Hahahah

>>>    This my secret.

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