The homework for 14th May.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : What’s the most boring thing you have to do?
A : It is a definitely working.
If i have a lot of money and i don`t need to work, i would not go out and always stay at home.
It is terrible that i have to work 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. on every weekdays.
So, my goal is earning a lot of money so that i don`t need to work.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eddy!
Thank you for your effort and honest thoughts! You expressed your ideas clearly. Just a quick tip: watch verb tenses (like “If I had…” for imaginary situations) and article use (like “every weekday” instead of “every weekdays”). Keep it up! you’re improving!
~~Teacher Kate
It is a definitely working.
>>It is definitely working.
If i have a lot of money and i don`t need to work, i would not go out and always stay at home.
>>If I had a lot of money and didn’t need to work, I would not go out and would always stay at home.
It is terrible that i have to work 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. on every weekdays.
>>It is terrible that I have to work from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. every weekday.
So, my goal is earning a lot of money so that i don`t need to work.
>>So, my goal is to earn a lot of money so that I don’t need to work.
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