The homework for 16th July.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Is it possible to ever have a truly hack-proof system?
A : In my opinion, that is impossible.
During a hack-proof system is getting better, a hacking system is also improving.
And, as i mentioned at our last class, Korean companies do not considering e-security system much.
Even though they are big companies and government companies, I saw many news about hacking.
So, I think that a truly hack-proof system is impossible at least in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi Eddy,
Thank you for taking the time to respond to this essay. :)
I sincerely hope that Korean corporations and government agencies will give this issue the attention it deserves. Strengthening cybersecurity is essential for the safety and well-being of the people of South Korea.
A : In my opinion, that is impossible.
During a hack-proof system is getting better, a hacking system is also improving.
And, as i mentioned at our last class, Korean companies do not considering e-security system much.
Even though they are big companies and government companies, I saw many news about hacking.
So, I think that a truly hack-proof system is impossible at least in Korea.
Thank you for taking the time to respond to this essay. :)
I sincerely hope that Korean corporations and government agencies will give this issue the attention it deserves. Strengthening cybersecurity is essential for the safety and well-being of the people of South Korea.
Thank you for attending tonight\'s class. See you again tomorrow. ^^
- Teacher Elly~
- Teacher Elly~
A : In my opinion, that is impossible.
>> CORRECT
During a hack-proof system is getting better, a hacking system is also improving.
>> While hack-proof systems are improving, hacking techniques are also evolving.
And, as i mentioned at our last class, Korean companies do not considering e-security system much.
>> And, as I mentioned in our last class, Korean companies do not consider e-security systems very much.
Even though they are big companies and government companies, I saw many news about hacking.
>> Even though they are large corporations and government agencies, I’ve seen a lot of news about hacking.
So, I think that a truly hack-proof system is impossible at least in Korea.
>> CORRECT
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