The homework for 17th July.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Would you rather repair a broken phone or buy a new one? Why?
A : I will buy a new one if I bought a phone more than 2 years ago.
But if I bought a phone less than 2 years ago, I will repair the phone.
It is because we normally make a deal as 2 years in Korea.
Before a deal is over, changing a phone is quite expensive.
So, my choice can be changed by duration.
강사 첨삭
Hi Eddy,
Thank you for taking the time to respond to this essay and share your insights. :)
Indeed, it’s more practical to replace a phone once the contract period has ended.
Thank you for taking the time to respond to this essay and share your insights. :)
Indeed, it’s more practical to replace a phone once the contract period has ended.
Thank you for your time tonight. See you again tomorrow.
- Teacher Elly~
A : I will buy a new one if I bought a phone more than 2 years ago.
>> I will buy a new one if I have had my phone for more than two years.
OR >> I would buy a new one if I had bought a phone more than 2 years ago.
But if I bought a phone less than 2 years ago, I will repair the phone.
>> But if I bought it less than two years ago, I will repair it.
>> But if I bought it less than two years ago, I will repair it.
OR >> But if I have had the phone for less than two years, I will have it repaired.
It is because we normally make a deal as 2 years in Korea.
>> This is because phone contracts in Korea usually last for two years.
>> This is because phone contracts in Korea usually last for two years.
OR >> This is because we usually sign two-year phone contracts in Korea.
Before a deal is over, changing a phone is quite expensive.
>> Before the contract ends, changing phones is quite expensive.
>> Before the contract ends, changing phones is quite expensive.
OR >> It’s quite expensive to change phones before the contract ends.
So, my choice can be changed by duration.
>> So, my decision depends on how long I’ve had the phone.
OR >> So, how long I’ve had the phone affects my decision.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.