The homework for 2/17: Past tension

2016-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jeny. I will attend my college friends' meeting tonight but urgent error occurred on our system. I have to analyze the root cause and I advised the requester to solve the problem , and It will take a long time. I don't know whether i can go there or not. = BODY = 1. Rahim wrote to his mother every week. 2. The wind blew furiously. 3. The boy stood on the burning deck. 4. She sang sweetly. 5. The old woman sat in the sun. 6. Your son swam very well. 7. His voice shook with emotion. 8. He ran a successful business. 9. He wasted his time in idleness. 10. A portrait hung on the wall.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

Thank you for your homework!!! Continue doing that!!!
I am very happy that you are eager to learn a lot of things and you want to know which field that you need to practice more. It is a good thing and it means that you are interested in learning a lot of things. I commend you for that.
T. Jeny

 

Friend Jeny.

>>correct
I will attend my college friends\' meeting tonight but urgent error occurred on our system.

>>I was suppose to attend my college friends\' meeting but an urgent error occured on our system this evening.
I have to analyze the root cause and I advised the requester to solve the problem , and It will take a long time.

>>I have to analyze the root cause and advised the requester to solve the problem, thus I know that it will take me a long time to do this.
I don\'t know whether i can go there or not.

>>correct
= BODY =
1. Rahim wrote to his mother every week.
>>correct
2. The wind blew furiously.
>>correct
3. The boy stood on the burning deck.
>>correct
4. She sang sweetly.
>>correct
5. The old woman sat in the sun.
>>correct
6. Your son swam very well.
>>correct
7. His voice shook with emotion.
>>correct
8. He ran a successful business.
>>correct
9. He wasted his time in idleness.
>>correct
10. A portrait hung on the wall.

>>correct

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