The homework for 23rd April.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : What things in your home couldn\'t you live without?
A : The things i must have in my home are bed, refrigerator, air conditioner, boiler and cell phone. The most necessary thing is a cell phone because i always see the cell phone after arriving home.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eddy!
Thanks for taking the time and effort to answer the homework question! I agree with your ideas especially the cellphone part haha. I can\'t live without my smartphone for even a day. Anyway, the corrections are very minor and few. Please check them out. Have a great night!
~~Teacher Kate
The things i must have in my home are bed, refrigerator, air conditioner, boiler and cell phone.
>>The things I must have in my home are a bed, refrigerator, air conditioner, boiler, and cell phone.
The most necessary thing is a cell phone because i always see the cell phone after arriving home.
>>The most necessary thing is a cell phone because I always look at my phone after arriving home.
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