The homework for 2nd July.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Do you always bring your wallet or purse with you when you go out? Why?
A : Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outing. 
When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung pay.
      But as I cannot pay transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Eddy! ^^,)
Having enough cash on hand is often a good idea in case of emergencies, power outages, or unforeseen circumstances when cards might not work.
Thank you for answering your homework. I have made some modifications.
Practice English whenever you can. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outing.
>>> Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outings.
When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung pay.
>>> OR: Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out, save for short trips.
>>> When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung Pay.
>>> OR: When I go out soon, I merely bring my phone because I can pay using Samsung Pay.
But as I cannot pay transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
>>> But as I cannot pay the transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
>>> OR: But I usually bring my wallet because I can\'t use my phone to pay the transportation fee.
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