The homework for 3/10: eaasy "If i have more free time"
학생이 쓴 원문
Jeny sam,
I know that it is for me what you commend for my attitude in my class.
Anyway, I am really glad for you to talk to with your husband working abroad until late night.
I sincerely hope that you will live with your all family sooner or later.
sam!
If it will be so, i hope you will continue to teach me, haha.
and I didn't yet take one book to improve my English ability, but instead of that, i read English editorial of the day everyday in English newspaper, Korea Herald. and I often read news of golf on LPGA homepage.
and i detailedly read my email in English, almost emails are in English.
Whenever I read anything both simple and complex , the words i don't know and understand are occurred.
= body =
If i have more free time, i want to take a rest or to sleep now. haha
and then I'd love to practice for all day. and watch a movie, musical and concert. after that if have a time, i want to go out for exercise and then i want to hike.
sam.. Are there many things for me to want to do
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh!!!!
We all want to do a lot of things.....hehehehe!!!! Experience a lot of things.....learn a lot of things....and enjoy!!!!
But we can one thing at a time....We can do what we want as long as we have time...Hheheheh!!!
I also want to do a lot of things but unfortunately....I can\'t do it because I am afraid to do it.hehehe
Have a great day, Oh!!!
T.Jeny
Jeny sam,
>>correctI know that it is for me what you commend for my attitude in my class.
>>I know that it\'s me whom you commend about my attitude in class.Anyway, I am really glad for you to talk to with your husband working abroad until late night.
>>Anyway, I am really glad to know that you were able to talk to your husband, who is working abroad, until late night.I sincerely hope that you will live with your all family sooner or later. sam!
>>I sincerely hope that you\'ll live with all of your family sooner or later, sam!If it will be so, i hope you will continue to teach me, haha.
>>correctand I didn\'t yet take one book to improve my English ability, but instead of that, i read English editorial of the day everyday in English newspaper, Korea Herald
>>I didn\'t take a book to improve my English ability, but instead I read an English editorial for the day everyday at the English newspaper, Korea Herald.
and I often read news of golf on LPGA homepage.
>>I often read the news at the LPGA homepage.and i detailedly read my email in English, almost emails are in English.
>>I read my emails in English in detail, because almost all of my emails are in English.Whenever I read anything both simple and complex , the words i don\'t know and understand are occurred.
>>Whenever I read, I come across simple and complex words which helps me bank on my vocabulary.= body =If i have more free time, i want to take a rest or to sleep now. haha
>>If i have more free time, I would like to rest and sleep. hahahaand then I\'d love to practice for all day.
>>And then, I\'d love to practice the whole day.
and watch a movie, musical and concert. after that if have a time, i want to go out for exercise and then i want to hike.
>>I would also like to watch a movie or a concert.
after that if have a time, i want to go out for exercise and then i want to hike.
>>If I still have time, I would like to go for an exercise and then hike a mountain.sam.. Are there many things for me to want to do
>>Sam, Do I want to do a lot of things?
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