The homework for 3/11: CONJUNCTION

2016-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Jeny sam. I do my homework for break time after lunch. Have a nice weekend and see you next Monday. = BODY = 1.If You boil water, It will evaporate. 2. I get up in the morning and i first brush my teeth. 3. He is quite famous as he is very modest. 4. The police arrived. When They found out, The burglar had disappeared. 5. If You are not careful, You will slip and fall. 6. He was not admitted because he was underage. 7. You will get it if you ask for it. 8. I told you not to do it. But you have done it again. 9. You can’t go wrong if you follow my instructions. 10. When the teacher entered the classroom, The students got up.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh! Thank you for your homework.I really admire your perseverance.And it paid off because you are now licensed in own field.You are a good example to other people.Keep it up!Have a great day!-Teacher Jeny-   Jeny sam. >>correctI do my homework for break time after lunch. >>I did my homework during my lunch break.Have a nice weekend and see you next Monday.>>correct= BODY =1.If You boil water, It will evaporate.>>correct2. I get up in the morning and i first brush my teeth.>>When I get up in the morning, I first brush my teeth.3. He is quite famous as he is very modest.>>Though he is quite famous, he is very modest.4. The police arrived. When They found out, The burglar had disappeared.>>When the police arrived, they found out that the burglar had disappeared.5. If You are not careful, You will slip and fall.>>correct6. He was not admitted because he was underage.>>correct7. You will get it if you ask for it.>>If you ask for it, you will get it. 8. I told you not to do it. But you have done it again.>>Though I told you not to do it, you have done it again.9. You can’t go wrong if you follow my instructions.>>correct10. When the teacher entered the classroom, The students got up. >>correct

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