The homework for 3/28: Tense

2016-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Jeny sam. Thanks for your kind words of comfort about my daughter's independence. She will feel lonely and fearful soon, i hope she will overcome it well. My son is a PD of SBS broadcasting. he is not a entertainment PD but a current affair and culture PD. He treat political, social issues, therefore he must have good common sence, conciousness, conscience and critical mind. I think he has a sufficient qualifications, therefore i am very prou of him. =body= 1. He goes for a walk every morning. 2. The minister reads the newspaper every day after breakfast. 3. My mother fast on Mondays. 4. Familiarity breeds contempt. 5. I will wait till you finish your work. 6. If it will rain we will get wet. 7. The child plays with his dog.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

You must be very proud of your son and daughter....I know!!! You and your wife have done a good job raising your children...so I am also proud of you.

Take care,Oh!!1

T. Jeny

 

Jeny sam.

>>correct
Thanks for your kind words of comfort about my daughter\'s independence.

>>correct
She will feel lonely and fearful soon, i hope she will overcome it well.

>>She will feel lonely and  frighten soon; I hope she will overcome the situation well.
My son is a PD of SBS broadcasting.

>>correct

he is not a entertainment PD but a current affair and culture PD.

>>He is not an entertainment PD but a current affair and culture PD.
He treat political, social issues, therefore he must have good common sence, conciousness, conscience and critical mind.

>>He treats political and social issues, therefore he must have good common sense, consciousness, conscience and critical mind.

I think he has a sufficient qualifications, therefore i am very prou of him.

>>I think he has sufficient qualifications, therefore I am very proud of him.
=body=
1. He goes for a walk every morning.

>>correct
2. The minister reads the newspaper every day after breakfast.

>>correct
3. My mother fast on Mondays.

>>My mother fasts on Mondays.
4. Familiarity breeds contempt.

>>correct
5. I will wait till you finish your work.

>>correct
6. If it will rain we will get wet.

>>If it rains we will get wet.
7. The child plays with his dog.

>>The child is playing with his dog.

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