The homework for 3/3: sorry

2016-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Jeny sam. I am sorry for absence today. I drank yesterday by midnight with my friends. and I slept without re-charging battery. To make it worse, i did not wake up on time. Jeny sam. Do you use KAKAO app? if yes, please register my id, "kyungsoh", and could you let me know your KAKAO id? In case of today, i want to contact you via KAKAO instead of this English correction. See you tomorrow. sam. = body = These homework was too difficult to solve. 1. This is our stop. We need to stop off here. 2. Does this train get at Milano Centrale? 3. He rode on his bike and got off down the road. 4. 'get in' she said. 'I'll drive you to the station.' 5. I saw they were following me, so I stopped and waited for them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

It was okay, Oh!!! Don\'t worry about it.

I really admire your perseverance. You really do have the passion to study and learn things in English!!

You are a good example to other people. Keep it up!
Have a great day!
-Teacher Jeny-

Jeny sam.

>>correct
I am sorry for absence today.

>>I am sorry for being absent today.
I drank yesterday by midnight with my friends.

>>I had some drinks with my friends until midnight.
and I slept without re-charging battery.

>>I slept without changing the battery of my phone.
To make it worse, i did not wake up on time.

>>the worst thing is I didn\'t wake up on time.
Jeny sam.

>>correct
Do you use KAKAO app? if yes, please register my id, \"kyungsoh\",

>>correct
and could you let me know your KAKAO id?

>>correct
In case of today, i want to contact you via KAKAO instead of this English correction.

>>Just like today\'s case, I want to contact you via KAKAO instead of using this homework page.
See you tomorrow. sam.
>>correct
= body =
These homework was too difficult to solve.

>>correct
1. This is our stop. We need to stop off here.

>>This is our stop. We need to _get_ _off_ here.
2. Does this train get at Milano Centrale?

>>Does this train _stop_ at Milano Centrale?
3. He rode on his bike and got off down the road.

>>e _got_ _on_ his bike and _rode_ _off_ down the road.
4. \'get in\' she said. \'I\'ll drive you to the station.\'

>>correct
5. I saw they were following me, so I stopped and waited for them.

>>correct

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