The homework for 3/31: essay "we learn more from~"
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Hello Oh,
I think you do have a lot of work nowadays, but it was nice talking to you today!!!!
Great minds have great purposes, others have wishes. Little minds are tamed and subdued by misfortune; but great minds rise above them.
We can all be successful in our own ways, may it be good or bad..... but I guess learning from our mistakes and enhancing the good things in us could make more successful.
T. Jeny
Jeny sam.
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Thanks for your evaluation today.
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I got a level 3 in parts of listening, vocabulary and pronunciation.
>>I got level 3 in the parts of listening, vocabulary and pronunciation.
I think i know well that i don\'t have such a qualification, but i know that it means that you try for me to continue to study hard in English.
>>I think, I know well that I don\'t have such qualifications, but I know that you want me to try and to continue to study hard.
And thanks for word \"impossible\".
>>And thanks for the word \"impossible\".
There is also no word, \"impossible\" ,in my dictionary like Napoleon.
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See you tomorrow.
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I think We in theory learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes, but we actually learn more from our successful actions.
>>According to the theory, we learn form our mistakes but actually we learn more from our success.
it is easy to follow a successful action, but mistake is accompanied by pain.
>>It is easier to follow successful actions thus mistakes are accompanied by pain.
through trial and error, peoples can learn more how to avoid failure or how to be succeed.
>>Through trial and error, people learn more on how to avoid mistakes or on how to succeed.
I learn from both mistake and success.
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Eventually it is a problem for me to be ready for accepting and receiving in respective of mistake or success.
>>Eventually, it could be problem for me to accept and receive something in respect to my mistake and success.
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