The homework for 3/4: Phrasal verb

2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Jeny sam. Below poem is very beautiful lyrical one but it is the biggest sad one because his first-surname was changed forcibly by Japan in 1941. "Counting the stars at night" written by Yun Dong-Ju In the sky where seasons pass Autumn fills the air. And ready I wait without worry to count all the stars she bears (omitted) One star for memories, and One star for loving One star for melancholy, and Another for longing One star for poetry, and Another for ma, mother, (omitted) Pining for something I scribble my name into a star spattered hill. Then bury it (again.) (omitted to the end) = body = 1. I hit on the idea while taking a stroll in the park. 2. Susie lost her temper when she saw her husband trying to hit out her best friend. 3. The police held the protesters back while the ministers left the venue. 4. Mark was very bad at his studies so his teacher held him for a year. 5. Mrs. [Name] held her dog on so that we could safely cross the yard.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

I searched the poem on the internet and I guess it is really a good one; thank you for informing me about it.

Thanks for your time and I am so happy to hear that positivity in you^^

I will do my best to help you improve.

Thanks for this and see you in class~

Teacher Jeny


Jeny sam.

>>correct
Below poem is very beautiful lyrical one but it is the biggest sad one

>>The poem below is a very beautiful lyrical poem thus it is the saddest one as well.
because his first-surname was changed forcibly by Japan in 1941.
>>Because his original surname was forcibly changed by Japan in 1941.
\"Counting the stars at night\" written by Yun Dong-Ju
>>correct
In the sky where seasons pass

>>Up where the seasons pass,
Autumn fills the air.

>>The sky is filled with autumn.
And ready I wait without worry

>>In this untroubled quietude
to count all the stars she bears (omitted)

>>I could almost count these autumn-couched stars.
One star for memories, and

>>Memory for one star,
One star for loving

>>love for another star,
One star for melancholy, and

>>sorrow for another star,

Another for longing

>>longing for another star,
One star for poetry, and

>>poetry for another star,
Another for ma, mother,  (omitted)

>>and oh! mother for another star.
Pining for something

>>I have written my name thereon
I scribble my name

>>all night to grieve over my bashful name.
into a star spattered hill.

>>seated on this star-showered bank,
Then bury it (again.) (omitted to the end)

>>all night to grieve over my bashful name.
(omitted to the end)
= body =

1. I hit on the idea while taking a stroll in the park.

>>correct
2. Susie lost her temper when she saw her husband trying to hit out her best friend.

>>Susie lost her temper when she saw her husband trying to hit on her best friend.
3. The police held the protesters back while the ministers left the venue.

>>correct
4. Mark was very bad at his studies so his teacher held him for a year.

>>correct
5. Mrs. [Name] held her dog on so that we could safely cross the yard.

>> Mrs. [Name] held her dog off so that we could safely cross the yard.

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