The homework for 3/4: Phrasal verb
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Teacher Jeny
Jeny sam.
>>correct
Below poem is very beautiful lyrical one but it is the biggest sad one
>>The poem below is a very beautiful lyrical poem thus it is the saddest one as well.
because his first-surname was changed forcibly by Japan in 1941.
>>Because his original surname was forcibly changed by Japan in 1941.
\"Counting the stars at night\" written by Yun Dong-Ju
>>correct
In the sky where seasons pass
>>Up where the seasons pass,
Autumn fills the air.
>>The sky is filled with autumn.
And ready I wait without worry
>>In this untroubled quietude
to count all the stars she bears (omitted)
>>I could almost count these autumn-couched stars.
One star for memories, and
>>Memory for one star,
One star for loving
>>love for another star,
One star for melancholy, and
>>sorrow for another star,
Another for longing
>>longing for another star,
One star for poetry, and
>>poetry for another star,
Another for ma, mother, (omitted)
>>and oh! mother for another star.
Pining for something
>>I have written my name thereon
I scribble my name
>>all night to grieve over my bashful name.
into a star spattered hill.
>>seated on this star-showered bank,
Then bury it (again.) (omitted to the end)
>>all night to grieve over my bashful name.
(omitted to the end)
= body =
1. I hit on the idea while taking a stroll in the park.
>>correct
2. Susie lost her temper when she saw her husband trying to hit out her best friend.
>>Susie lost her temper when she saw her husband trying to hit on her best friend.
3. The police held the protesters back while the ministers left the venue.
>>correct
4. Mark was very bad at his studies so his teacher held him for a year.
>>correct
5. Mrs. [Name] held her dog on so that we could safely cross the yard.
>> Mrs. [Name] held her dog off so that we could safely cross the yard.
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