The homework for 3/7: essay "The things that i can't live without"

Jeny sam.

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I really thank for your response about the poem written by Yun Dong-Ju.

>>I am really thankful for your response on the poem written by Yun dong-Ju.
But I don\'t understand the poem you made and sent me.

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Poem is still very difficult for me. haha

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and Thanks again for your praise for my active attitude in our class.

>>and thanks again for your praise because of my active attitude in our class.
I will keep it up and i won\'t never get tiered trying to check the corrections every day.

>>I will keep it up an I will never get tired of checking the corrections everyday.
sam!, it\'s 5:00 pm. i am happy to do homework though it\'s too late.

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See you tomorrow.
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There are many things that i can\'t live without.

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The first is my family, my wife and children because they are my everything.

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2nd one is money just like you. haha

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3rd one is my hobbies, playing guitar, doing exercise and any others.

>>3rd one are my hobbies like playing the guitar, doing exercises and others.
4th one is having a drink with persons i love including my neighborhood, friends and colleague in company.

>>4th one is having a drink with the people I love which are my neighbors, friends and colleagues.
5th one is keeping a job even if the job is a humble occupation as long as possible.

>>5th one is keeping my job in a humble way as possible.
the others are various.

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